| "Mine!!" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: -xkagomex- [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 12:08 CDT
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Yayyyyyy!!!!!!! You updated!!!!! I think this was the best chapter yet! I love sessy/ Kagome fics Please oh Please Oh please!! Update soon!!!! Much thanks, Danni
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 18:11 CDT
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such a very good chapter, i cant wait to find out what the first gift is.
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Reviewed By: Dragon from hell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very good, I hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very good story so far I found it just yesterday and couldnt stop reading till I got to the final chapter you had last updated , as to your question about sota's eyes I do believe from the anime they are a chocolate brown color
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Reviewed By: midnight3498 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 23:48 CDT
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Good story I love it so far! After the sirst chapter I was hooked and couldn't stop reading it. Some of your grammer could use some work. I cant wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i tried that actually. it just kept saying, and i quote " you have to be logged in to acess this page" ~sessh- which is y she's putting them here. *smirk* i win. ~tba-takes a bite out of push up icecream* yeah. watever. ~sessh- well. i say give her something that may be a real shoker t wake her up! i say- ~tba-kiss her? ~sessh-... i was gonna say scream in her ear. but thats a possibility. ~tba- yeah. sure. a possinility. it seems more likely than ur scream idea. ~sessh-... who wouldnt wake up if someone screamed in their ear? ~tba- deaf people and people who are in coma. ~sessh- yeah, well, they dont count. ~tba-... oh gee. then maybe its people who 'sleep like a rock' ~sessh-... ~tba-sighs and shakes head* on well. update soon. bye! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 10:33 CDT
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I hope kagome gets better very soon.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
* breif sob* atleast it wasnt sesshy. ~sessh- oh yeah. i can imagine that. bloody. ~tba- or rin. poor souta, did i mention naraku's sick and wrong? ~sessh- uh... wrong-sick? ~tba- Ee tu... yeah. wrong sick. `sessh- then i agree. but this is her story. if u actually care about ur stries write them here. ~tba- nahh. i write on fanfic. even though i cant logg in. maybe ill write them here. maybe. ~sessh- uh... chocolate ice cream? `tba- and...? ~sessh- cookie dough icecream? ~tba- and...? ~sessh- digs in pocket* uh... a... *takes out box* a... necklace with ur name on it? ~tba- my name or.... My Name ~sessh-.... ur real name ~tba- snatches box* ok! `sessh- when? ~tba- um...in two weeks,of never. *skips away* ~sessh-... con aritist. ~tba- nope! ur just that stupid! *laughs* update soon! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 05:22 CDT
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I like your story and can not wait for an update. i hope to see one soon! I.S.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 00:26 CDT
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this was a good chapter, but why in alot of sess/kagome fics do you authors have inuyasha be physically abusive? that's something i dont really get i mean if inuyasha loves kikyou isnt that enough pain for kagome? with all the stuff kagome brought from her time i hope she included a few history books (so she can teach her demon friends when not to be around), some good cast iron cooking pots and pans, some seeds for her favorite foods and spices, and some other things she can use or trade in her life.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oohh! sesshomaru do something! ~sessh-punches inu* good enough 4 you? ~tba- well. i was actually thinking of you killing kikyo. but i guess ill do that.*takes tokijjin from sessh* you know. this is lighter than it looks. ~sessh-how is it u are not controled? ~tba- you have your secrets. i have mine. now shut up while i stabb kik. ~kikyo- i heard that. ~tba-... so? it doesnt mean you can prove anything! *slashes her with tokijjin8gives sword to sessh&smiles* here u go. ~sessh-... *takes sword* ~tba-grabbs tensiga*slashes kikyo* my job is done*gives sessh tensiga* ~sessh-why would u kill her than revive her? ~tba-.. i have my reasons 4 doing things. you have yours.*smirk* and that is a secret. ~sessh-sigh* females. ~kikyo-ughhh wat hap- ~tba-hits kikyo with the flat part of a katana* i liked it better when u were unconsis. ~sessh- as do i. update soon. ~tba- draggs kikyo's body out into the steet and comes running back* remember. i did NOTHING to kikyo. soo if inuyasha asks. kikyo was running from the devil. she was hallucinating. so she got run over. ~sessh-... u are the devil. ~tba- nope. just the goddess of all things evil and death. bye! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it. ~sessh- but if u destroy the well. she wont get any of her future things. ~tba- and she would run out... eventually. ~kags- ur right. and i didnt even say good bye to yuki, eri, and ayumi. ~tba-and if u got hurt.. and i mean serverly. u couldnt go to a hospital. ~sessh- and wat about the shrine? ~tba- oh, and if someone thinks ur missing they would inveastigate. and people. (forensic scientics ) could figure out that ur finger prints were on the well! ~sessh- and if the well is destroyed in the fedural era. that meanstheres no well in kagome's time. ~kagome-AND THAT MEANS I NEVER WENT BACK TO FEDURAL JAPAN AND NEVER MET INUYASHA OR ANYBODY! ~tba- see. destroying the well may be a bad thing. it is best to leave it alone unltill further notice. but i guess scince its ur fan fic. its ur choice. update soon. ~KAGOME*freaking out* OH MY FUCKING GOD! SESSHOMARU! HELP ME PROTECT THE WELL! *jumps on sesshomaru's back* ~sessh- this is disturbing. ~KAGS- I DONT CARE! JUST RUN! ~sessh- sigh* fine. *runs off in the direction of the well.* ~tba- anime sweat drop* uh... should i tell them the well is that way? 8points in oppistie direction that sessh & kags didnt run in* oh well. *shrugs* they'll figure it out sooner or later. see ya. *waves* ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: -xkagomex- [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 21:03 CDT
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I love your story i couldn't stop reading it. Please update soon i'll be waiting!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 21:54 CDT
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This is great! poor kagome dealing with all the trouble in her own time as well as in the past. i wonder how the others will take kagome having sesshomaru destroy the well.
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 03:22 CDT
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wow... just wow. Wonderfully written, despite a few grammatical errors. Kept me so sucked in I just couldnt stop... even though its like 3:30 in the morning now... addict? I wouldnt say that o.o CANT WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!!
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