| "Mine!!" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Title: This would make me very sad
Reviewed By: Pandegin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really wish that you would continue to update on here. Since i do not go on any other site would you mind emailing or writing me back to give me the link to oneof the other sites you post on? i adore your story and really hope that you would do me this small favor, i would be very upset to never read your story again. thank you very much, pandegin. email: pandegin@yahoo.com
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Title: Souta's eyes
Reviewed By: Uh... dunno? On: April 23, 2009 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Souta's eye colour is originally a brown so deep it was sometimes black, but considering that you made Kagome's eye colour blue to start with maybe you should make his eyes grey-ish which is closer to blue than brown which makes it more believable that their related.
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Title: **too lazy to log in**
Reviewed By: Little_Red On: April 14, 2009 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
its not really that im too lazy to log in... its that im on a computer other than my own, and i dont want to log in on this one, becuase then it would log me out on my own... yeah... anywho, i enjoied the chapter. even with the almost there, kinda but not really sex scene... it felt a little short, but i loved that you have them get married, the image in my head of them dancing, even if only once, was fantastic... lol, anywho, update soon yo!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 16:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmm sess has tenseiga with him right, can kagome or inuyasha use it?
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 02:53 CDT
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sessy's going to die, well it's ok if it's only for a few minutes before he gets brought back by something.
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Title: **too lazy to log in**
Reviewed By: Little_Red On: April 08, 2009 09:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
...That's horrible! He's gonna die! I mean, he may not stay dead but still... HE'S GONNA DIE?!?!? That's not cool... Well, besides that, my only complain is at then end when you said she cried and cried, which made it sound more like a fairy tale for little kids... Once was enough to get the point across, so I suggest revising...
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 22:40 CDT
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Omg you go Kagome teach Inuyasha who's boss. lol Awww why does Kagome get to see Sesshy Abs and not me... *sniff* She's so lucky!!! Keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 15:27 CDT
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after all of that hardcore stalking and whatnot... Inu's reaction was a bit of a surprise... but I'm sure you have something up your sleave...
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2009 14:18 CDT
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Oh my God I love your story so much!!! You're such a good writing!!! Sesshoumaru is such a flirt... I like the way he flirts so openly with Kagome... It's smexy... Keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 23:11 CDT
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been a while huh? but its still as good as ever... keep up the good work... just dont wait so long between updates...
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 00:11 CST
Comment/Review:
thank you for the update and the summary
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 23:30 CST
Comment/Review:
you should probably go back and edit the first several chapters... and the whole, he doesnt have his arm, oh surprise he does have his arm, thing kinda through me off gaurd... but im glad you put it in there...
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Reviewed By: mikoyami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 09:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read alot of fics on this site and i really do enjoy yours i cant wait for the next chapter...keep up the good work!!!!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 04:15 CST
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thank you so much, two updates in the same day was a nice surprise. i like how kagome and sess's relationship is progressing, many authors make it progress to quickly and make it so once they are together there are few if any problems that they have to face. keep up the good work
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Title: :o:o:o:o
Reviewed By: inuluver4everhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 06:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!! that bites! i love the story so far so i really hope for your sake that the files are safe!! i know if i was in ur shoes that id hate to have to rewrite all of that over again!! i think that mabey in stead of a flash drive u should try an sd card... at lease then nothing can break off of it! im keepin my fingers crossed for ya!
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