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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it. ~sessh- but if u destroy the well. she wont get any of her future things. ~tba- and she would run out... eventually. ~kags- ur right. and i didnt even say good bye to yuki, eri, and ayumi. ~tba-and if u got hurt.. and i mean serverly. u couldnt go to a hospital. ~sessh- and wat about the shrine? ~tba- oh, and if someone thinks ur missing they would inveastigate. and people. (forensic scientics ) could figure out that ur finger prints were on the well! ~sessh- and if the well is destroyed in the fedural era. that meanstheres no well in kagome's time. ~kagome-AND THAT MEANS I NEVER WENT BACK TO FEDURAL JAPAN AND NEVER MET INUYASHA OR ANYBODY! ~tba- see. destroying the well may be a bad thing. it is best to leave it alone unltill further notice. but i guess scince its ur fan fic. its ur choice. update soon. ~KAGOME*freaking out* OH MY FUCKING GOD! SESSHOMARU! HELP ME PROTECT THE WELL! *jumps on sesshomaru's back* ~sessh- this is disturbing. ~KAGS- I DONT CARE! JUST RUN! ~sessh- sigh* fine. *runs off in the direction of the well.* ~tba- anime sweat drop* uh... should i tell them the well is that way? 8points in oppistie direction that sessh & kags didnt run in* oh well. *shrugs* they'll figure it out sooner or later. see ya. *waves* ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: -xkagomex- [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 21:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your story i couldn't stop reading it. Please update soon i'll be waiting!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 21:54 CDT
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This is great! poor kagome dealing with all the trouble in her own time as well as in the past. i wonder how the others will take kagome having sesshomaru destroy the well.
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 03:22 CDT
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wow... just wow. Wonderfully written, despite a few grammatical errors. Kept me so sucked in I just couldnt stop... even though its like 3:30 in the morning now... addict? I wouldnt say that o.o CANT WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!!
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