Reviewed By: Zeppo V2.0 On: August 22, 2002 17:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty cool stuff, lots of action and the bad guys are pretty mysterious. It seems like a pretty BIG story and I like the fact that the civvies have to take up arms to defend themselves.
The only gripes I have are the writing style, using a script style rather than a novel style.
The other thing is the grammer, but I'll let you off on that one ;).
Also I don't know if you know or not, but there are bits of dialogue that seem to be missing from Chaps 13 and 14.
Other than that it's pretty cool, I wonder if Robert will meet up with any of the other characters? I'm also looking forward to seeing when Rick shows up. Don't give up on it, it's a cool idea, kinda Aliens-esque, I think!
Well cya! |
