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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2011 10:03 EDT
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At the beginning of the fic, when you were describing Neji's situation as well as that of Hinata's, the name of the tea house was Caged Vixens. Will you be changing that, or changing the name in this chapter to match the first mention of the place? |
Reviewed By: Screaming Queen On: July 01, 2010 18:58 EDT
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*Glare, eyebrow twitch* Update! Or I find you, take you discount shopping and put you in the most hideous thing I can find, take a picture and put it on photobucket! Wait, I live in Japan now...I can't. DAMN IT!
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Reviewed By: Fuuko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2010 14:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yes...i want more...keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 17:40 EDT
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I am SO glad that you updated! I was beginning to think that you had given up on this story and BOOM you surprise me. I love surprises. I am glad that Kakashi is back in the story and I am intrigued on how you are going to continue to blend both worlds together. Keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon.
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Title: ::blink-blink::
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2009 01:22 EDT
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Woah... For some reason this story brought up the idea of Ichigo running around screaming 'DEATH BY CLEAVAGE!' in fear as he is being chased by Yoruichi, Rangiku, and Orihime. Don't know why, don't want to know why, and I don't want any MTV (TAKE THAT DIRE STRAITS!). But anyways, I'm suprised you didn't bring up the fact that it has been over a year since you last updated this story and tried to explain it. DAMN YOU JIRAIYA! DAMN YOU AND YOUR PORN! ::blink:: Hopefully you won't try for a two-year wait for the next update, otherwise I shall Riverdance, thus creating an earthquake to break California off from the continent, thus sinking it beneath the waves. Probably won't have any effect on you, but as PotUSA so eloquently put it, 'Fuck California'. Damnit, now I want to listen to Lump and Peaches. Ja ne. The Goliath's Commandment - In accordance with Statute 73 of the Awesome Act, Ninja's are hereby banned from Peach Orchards WOOHOO! I referenced the music video for Peaches. Seriously, Ninja (as ninja is both singular and plural) did show up and attack the band while they were performing in a Peach Orchard. They really must have wanted those peaches
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Reviewed By: Fireheart125 On: June 18, 2009 17:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicee ^-^ This story line is really good!! Please update soon ;D
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Title: Enough is Enough!
Reviewed By: Screaming Queen On: May 27, 2009 13:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE DAMN IT! *cute face* Please! I don't live near Regina anymore so I can't bug her as much. Oh, but I've got your email now. I forgot about that. *evil laugh* Beware of the Screaming Queen...he will fill your mailbox full of crap until you update! LOL! Just kidding...not really. Please give me the Naruto hottness I crave and I shall leave you alone. Oh, and Regina's latest excuse for you was your computer moved to China and cornered the opium market. Beat some sense into that woman would you? Much love and requests for updates! Your Screaming Queen Chris
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Nefra aka Jaxxia7 On: May 12, 2008 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl! Loved the new chapter. Now you know me and how I operate so you know I always look at the reviews. *grin* I found one that was funny as hell on this story that I'm sure you've already gotten a kick out of...especially considering the one that reviewed *coughflamedcough* has absolutely NO stories on his profile therefore can't say whether or not you're not being creative by using the same names. I mean come on, how the hell else are we supposed to know who you're talking about. You got the guy that looks like Jiraiya, the guy that looks like Sasuke, etc. I'm sorry, I find that funny. ANYway, I loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one. Too much fun stuff here to let go...especially that lame excuse of a flame. Keep up the awesome work girlfriend. Yes I'm too much of a flame retardant for my own good. LMAO! Ja ne! Nefra aka Jaxxia7
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Reviewed By: porygon75052 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 18:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
did you hav to use the same name as the people they are reincarnated as do you need a little help being creative ?
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: May 12, 2008 16:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what it is that draws me in about this story but i absolutely love it. Please keep up the good work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: May 03, 2008 13:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a powerful start. I would love to see what you do with it. And the fact that naruto lost his voice makes it all the more powerful for somereason. Keep up the good work and update soon please... ^_~
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Reviewed By: moonlit dew [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 15:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, hon! I gotta say, your idea totally blew me away! It's so original (or at least I've never seen it done before)! I honestly hope to be able to read more of this soon. I think the world needs more Naruto/Bleach crossovers, and you're a valuable asset in doing just that! I especially like that you went with yaoi for this. I was so getting fed up with the Naruto/Harem fics. Not that I'll be against a Naruto/MaleHarem! Fu fu fu fu fu...Now that'd be something...Anyway, I look forward to seeing where you take this next. Kisses from your story's newest fan!
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Reviewed By: alana_the_lioness On: April 10, 2008 08:30 EDT
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This was cool. I haven't read many bleach/naruto crossovers, this was good though. UPDATE!
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Title: Pretty Please with Sugar on top?
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 01:34 EDT
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Please, oh please, do not let this story slip away. Many an author has the unfortunate fate of beginning a story that is well loved, and then throwing it away. It is rare for people to come up with good stories and keep them up. I have seen 4 other crossovers with these two animes/mangas (You probably read the mangas, lucky person), and only one of them is even remotely likely to get finished, and even then I haven't seen an update for two months now. It doesn't help that it's only connection to Bleach is a half-assed attempt to claim that the Kyuubi is just a super-powerful Hollow (Blasphemy! The furball would unleash all of his/hers powers upon such fools), but I digress. I pray that you never suffer the bane of Intellect, Writer's Block! Oh we oh... Killer Tofu!!! I wonder if anyone else gets that quote. It made watching Nickolodean worth it. I think I may have insulted them by NOT attempting to correctly spell their name, seeing as how I punch my best friend for misspelling stuff, despite his dyslexia, which shows how much I adore proper spelling, word use, and acceptable grammar. Rants again... Whatever, I bow my head to you.
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Reviewed By: Soliderboy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow update soon.
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