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| "I Wanted..." Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: TT.TT
Reviewed By: RavenSilverKat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O TT.TT That's so mean! It's so well written but it's so sad. I was just sitting there the whole story with a sad-sappy smile on my face while thinking of my own love and then BAM! It makes me want to cry thinking that that could happen to him! Even though, it was wonderfully written, very much so. Good job.
| Title: Touching
Reviewed By: innocencedied2nite [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you really know how to write them. You have a way of keeping the reader on the edge. I wasn't expecting the ending at all, and found myself rapidly blinking blurred eyes. The flash backs were well placed and well explained. You did a great job with details and the plot flows nicely. Kudos on a well written story!
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