| "The Rose Petals" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to have to agree with MidniteKitsune... very confusing... I'm not quite following how Inuyasha could misinterpret "I'm with someone else, so leave." Also why did Inuyahsa wait three years? where was Kagome? Why did Kagome wait a year for Inuyasha? Your story has a lot of loose ties that need to be taken care of and you need to re-read them before you post them, the spelling and grammar are bad, definitely not the worst I've seen though. ^_^
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Title: Confusing?
Reviewed By: MidniteKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm, a really nice story but I think that the rating is a bit too high for it. Also you have the story in the wrong section. This should be in the InuYasha section. You have it in Anima+. You should change this. Other than that good job.
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