| "Phoenix Sannin" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: anonomous_twin_angel On: April 10, 2009 17:02 CDT
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My apologies, I just went to fanfiction.net and noticed that you have updated there but just not on mediaminer. I should have thought to check there first, but is it possible for you to post your updates here as well.
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Reviewed By: anonomous_angel On: April 10, 2009 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good story and I really like the summons although it could be nice to see them in action or at least see a bit more of what they taught Naruto. NO major complains on spelling but I have noticed a few sentences every now and then that seem as if they're missing a word here or there. May want to check that every now and again. You have a really good story going yet you haven't updated since October, that's roughly 5 months. I life can get in the way and writers block can be troublesome, but would it be to much to ask for at least a little note if your not going to be writing for a while still. Also you'd likely get more reviews if you update a bit more. As a human being though I do understand that things get in the way so I can't justify saying "Update Or Else". Plus I think that people who say that should try writing themselves because I'd likely bet that most of them don't. That's besides the point because I'm babbling now and I'll end it here. Good story, looking out to read more, and any other you do in the future.
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Reviewed By: narufreak1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 16:17 CST
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wow cant wait for the next chap. and sorry no naked pic for you ^_^
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Reviewed By: Fez On: October 12, 2008 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best fics ive read keep on writing
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Reviewed By: Sasuke-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 20:26 CDT
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Really great! Update SOON PLZ!!!
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Reviewed By: lancer081292 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 09:12 CDT
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one major complaint i have is, its wrong for sarutobi to decide on what naruto will specialize in, specializing in something is something the person has to decide i mean, what if naruto had a natural affinity for genjutsu but seince sarutobi told him what to specialize in naruto is hindered.
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Reviewed By: jem89 On: April 10, 2008 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is extremely enjoyable. It's original and exciting. I sincerely hope that you will continue to update. Thank you. : )
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Reviewed By: me On: April 09, 2008 18:06 CDT
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You know that Sannin means "three ninjas", right? So it'd be kinda hard to give Naruto that title my himself, since there needs to be a group of three.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 16:34 CDT
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Heh, sweet update. Neh, I think I already read this on fanfiction.net, but whatever. Neh. Continue to update here on Mediaminer, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Passerby_Dyl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, though I think Naruto beat Jiraiya way to easily. Update soon, im looking forward to seeing the scene where Kurenai and Naruto meet :P
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like the story so far. write more please.
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