| "Alchemy Academy" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: luv it !!
Reviewed By: pinkXmiko23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i give u props i dont really lyk edwin myself and i luv the idea of ed and another girl please keep going i luv it !!
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Reviewed By: fullmetal1090 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 6 was great i love this story and im looking forward to future chapters i love the shiori+ed this is the best fullmetal fanfic ive read thankyou for writing it and please write more chapters i really love this story this reacent chapter i think its chapter 6 is awsome i love thank you and hope to see more chapters soon
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Title: alchamy acadamy
Reviewed By: fullmetal196 On: April 10, 2008 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok the reason i gave you aa 6 on spelling and gramer its not bad but its not great i dont want to nag you about it though because i really love this story it has a great plot and is very enjoyable and if you still need a beta i can be it by the way this story has alot of creativty youve changed alot and kept alot even added new things and i look forward to reading the new chapters in this story and the storys to come thank you for writing it please update a soon as you can:) hey this is a great story any way thanks
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