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| "Rear End of Evangelion" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: bubbleduckie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Hot and Heavy lemon you've got here. I find Asuka's behaviour really amusing and I was so hooked to the story that I finished it right away. Great fic!
| Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was terrific. The plot was well thought and realized. The different take at the characters were done very well. Each one actually seemed like they were from different nations and cultures. Shinji, the good ole American soldier, Asuka, the rave dancing European druggie, and Rei, the obedient quiet Japanese soldier. Your use of Maya as more as the hapless lab assistant was clever as well as Gendo's relationship with her. Somehow you made Gendo even more of a bastard than he was in the series amazingly enough. However the story feels a little too condensed. I felt maybe you could have expanded it to several more chapters by focusing on some of the sub-plots and secondary characters and even some more exploration of characters like Asuka or Shinji too. Hell, I would even be satisfied with side stories based on this universe. I was highly entertained by it. Another minor criticism, the quick explanation of acronyms and phrases and such while at first were helpful, after a while I was hoping you'd find clever ways to answer that question within the narrative itself via character internal narrative or dialog. Though I can't really complain too much, it didn't take much away from the story. So yeah, great job and I hope to see more from you in the future, this was a well laid out story. But before I go: Ecstasy means happy I couldn't stop laughing at this. Aiko perhaps was the wisest of all the characters.
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