| "Pain and... pain?" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: DOH!!!!!
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story to bits, promise youl keep ur story on that adultfanfiction site for like 2 more years!!! cos im not 18 yet, im 17 and im too scared that if i go on that website its gona send something back to the computer about how im on an 18+ website.waaah and then my dad would find out and AHHHHHHHHHH that'd be horrid since he thinks im like an innocent little kid.damn. so please just dont ever remove it from that site! wait till i get there!!!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude...i like wanna go cry now, you're a great writer, don't give up k?
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Reviewed By: Flaming Jello(offline) On: April 06, 2008 07:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was Great!!! (In the depressing sort of way) But i loved it all the same!!! So far, besides the Jason, my favorite character is Troy. I just love his personality. I hope you add more of him soon! XD Please update fast!!
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelEmrys On: April 04, 2008 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, I can't wait to see what happens. My guess is that the man from the laundryroom is going to be somewhat important? I can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: Flaming Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love This Story!!!! Jason is so cute and in my head- a dengerous place- he seems absolutely amazing. Please update soon! Im dying to see what happens next!
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 10:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm LOVING this... it's got me hooked already! Johnathan sounds like a dick... then again it seems like all the characters that have been introduced so far are pretty much dicks except Jason xD. Keep up the awesome work!
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