"Unseen Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Hmm Reviewed By: T On: April 08, 2009 08:07 CDT Comment/Review: Very interesting. The stroy line is quite good. Yes, indees the characters have changed dramaticlly but that's the point of fanfiction. It is very interesting and i would love to read more. unfortunently you havn't updated in quite awhile. -T
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Reviewed By: MoonStar776 On: February 28, 2009 20:18 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: TO be honest with you this is a horrible fan fic.You don't capture the characters well and it realy truly is a horrible story. Im ean I can't see Edward becoming a bad person in such short time(to vampire's). And did you even read the books because its not a very good story. I hate you making Carlisle mad like that, he's actually kind and understanding.I HATE YOU YOU SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(AND bLOW)
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Title: ..... Reviewed By: kagome_inu_lubber [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 23:17 CST Comment/Review: ...y rite sumthing like dis?
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