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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2009 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That lemon was incredibly beautiful, and exceptionally written! Sizzling yet with just the right touch of romance (wow, my grammar is dead right now...) which is everything that a lemon should be. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 13:08 CDT
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Great chapter, I hope we find out what Sess & Shippo were up to for the 500 years!
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Reviewed By: Ive got my forty Ounce and a System to Overthrow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 00:16 CDT
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Wow... that was amazing! Update soon
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome and inuyasha are finally together... what will happen next... at least they know sesshoumaru and shippo are there to help... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 22:16 CDT
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Really beautiful chapter
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: September 07, 2009 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story its really good update soon
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Reviewed By: Ive got my forty Ounce and a System to Overthrow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 03:42 CDT
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Oh wow, seems like Kagome just can't get a break and have a normal relationship with Inuyasha...that is really sad. But I really can't wait for Kagome to see Shippo again and see what happens now that the jewel is finally complete!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2009 17:00 CDT
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Really enjoying the story so far, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2009 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that kagome & inuyasha are together... interesting reunion kagome & inuyasha had with sesshoumaru... lots of changes... now for their reunion with shippo and kirara?... the jewel is complete - what will they do with it now?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2009 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Temporal paradoxes are fun things... I wonder how long it will take Kagome to realize that if Inuyasha did go back to the past, it would thus change everything that has since become reality, meaning the Sesshoumaru that she was just speaking to, as she knew him, would then cease to exist, not to mention what may or may not become of little Shippou. Suppose one of those youkai who came looking for Inuyasha back in the past, should they end up finding him, started a battle way too close to Kaede's village? Somebody needs to explain to Kagome that everything is as it should be. Of course, I know you have no intention of splitting them up like her angst-ridden thoughts are currently focusing on, so I can't wait to see what you do in the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2009 02:46 CDT
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sweet! somehow i missed the last chapter, so glad i got the alert for this one. ♣ it is so great that he could go back to her. one wonders when we'll see shippou and what sort of adventures await inuyasha and kagome now in the present. i guess they still have to protect the jewel until they can get rid of it. one wonders what kind of power bad youkai think they could get with it that they can't have with money or even the splitting of the atom-- personal strength is not something that is a determining factor in this age. ♥
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Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYAYAY!!! I am so glad you have updated on this story... I've been so hoping you'd finish! Please don't let this one fall by the wayside, I am really enjoying your portrayal of Kagome - and the relationship between her and Inu.
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Reviewed By: Ive got my forty Ounce and a System to Overthrow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 02:31 CDT
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I am sad that Inuyasha had to say goodbye to everyone while Kagome couldn't, but I'm really looking forward to seeing the next chain of events. Keep up the good work ^^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that kagome and inuyasha are together... sad that inuyasha said goodbye to the others... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your work and have been reading it as quickly as I can. I really enjoy what I am reading and hope to finish reading what you have posted in another couple of days. I noticed it has been a while since you updated this work and I hope you finish it. Please don't leave us hanging as to whether he came back to Kagome through the well or through time.
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