| "Same Problems, Different Time" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Khai910 On: October 26, 2008 09:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, this is really cool plot idea. Just a couple of things, Sango is spelled like Sango not like Songo, and beware the giant blocks of text. ^^ I would love to beta/edit for you, if you like. ^^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Merry Christmas???wouldn't it be Happy Halloween? looks like this will be a good story... I was thinking.. I bet that when she makes that wish... EVERY ONE comes back even the ones that they don't want to be brought back...
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 23:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
this sounds great! please update soon.
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sad but very interesting. I hope to see another update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: PinkIcePrincess23 On: March 31, 2008 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME IDEA! I HOPE U CONTINUE SOON!
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