"A Merry Chase" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: pewterwings Reviewed By: pewter_wings [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 23:36 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I laughed, even with a belly ache. Laughter is a difficult thing to produce. You did well!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 19:24 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: What makes this so great is that it's completely believable! I could totally see something like that happen in the canon, including the prank Shippou had pulled while they were bathing.
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