| "I Was Scared" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 06:14 CST
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Yay! They got together!
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Reviewed By: MaraJade116 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 09:25 CDT
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ahhh, human!Inu, one of my favorite guilty pleasures! I really liked how it was done too - because even though it was clear that his new moon night was a catalyst for their realizations, Kagome didn't really even take conscious notice of it. Of course, who would in her situation! ;D And loved that Inuyasha definitely noticed the differences at certain points - wishing he still had his heightened senses. But it was nice that they didn't have to worry about the claws issues - at least for their first time. Without a doubt my favorite part was: "From months of experience, he knew all too well that the skirt proved to be no obstruction, and he left it on." It made me laugh in pervy delight. It totally implies [in my mind, at least] that he's been noticing her a lot more - and her short skirt... and probably everything underneath as well ^_^ Wonderful all around!
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Reviewed By: handypup [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 11:36 CDT
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very sweet, i quite enjoyed it!
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Title: Question..
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know after Miroku's plan backfired?? Well did't you say he broke his ribs? Because he didn't seem to be injured when they were back in the hut.... Just wonderin but apat from that it was good!
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Reviewed By: SummerNightsxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 09:39 CDT
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Just thought i would let you know, the link you have at the botton of the page is wrong. there is a space in the word colored, betwen the c and the o. You might want to fix that for the other people who might not be able to figure out why it doesnt work. great story though :D
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 07:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice story... cute and sweet... really liked it... good work...
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