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| "Full Of Grace" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 20:10 CST
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Hey I like the last line!!! Oh Im the beta to the girl below!!! Yep last line rocks me socks!!!
| Reviewed By: Sayo124 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya! as you can see, i'm Sayo. i was going through old reviews to my one fic and saw your name. then, once i clicked to go to your profile, i saw this little one-shot and decided to return the favor and read it. XD me and my beta read it together over the phone, actually (to be honest...) I really liked inuyasha... he seemed in character. and everyone else, as well. although, to be fair, my favorite part of the ENTIRE story was the last line: "... it was worth getting pinned to a tree." XD THAT, my dear, made my night! Anyhoo, happy new year! :3 and happy writing!
| Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 17:28 CDT
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this was a wonderful story. i loved the fresh perspective that it brought to light. i appreciate inuyasha's feelings of having to carry everyone's burdens, while not dropping his own. good work, and that you for a great read!
| Reviewed By: Rays On: April 06, 2008 10:26 CDT
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Really good one-shot! The ending was a bit sad, but I am getting tired of happy endings anyway. I liked the way inuyasha was finally allowed to give his (unhindered) view on things, but I did kind of miss the point of view from the others and the clash between the two. This could have done in somewhat more detail, however it also works from inu's POV alone. Looking forward to reading any future stories (actually this one-shot does have some potential for becoming a longer story ...) greets, Rays.
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