| "In secret places" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: satomika [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2010 00:27 CDT
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there had to be... and there was one... when sousuke made the choice for himself... nice! i love it! and all your other FMP stories...
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Title: Fantastic stuff
Reviewed By: zantaz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2009 05:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Full Metal Panic: TSR as it should be!! This should be like, the bonus episode..but then the censors might not let it through :P What always frustrates in TSR and before it is how the Kaname and Sousuke dance around each other's true feelings. Much more satisfying when they just get it out in the open. Of course, those preferring more drama and longer-drawn tensions won't like this approach but I find this much more satisfying. At least we know where both of them stand. Anyway, would be interesting to see how Sousuke and Kaname would deal with someone like Leonard, who isn't as lunatic as Gauron yet more dangerously calculating. Would be nice to see Kaname, with her Whispered powers assist Sousuke and maybe together they can make miniaturised armors to help both Sousuke and Kaname defeat Leonard and his miniature Arm Slaves. Will Sousuke and Kaname strengthen their commitment together in face of new challenges? Sequel/continuation please. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Kayster On: December 08, 2008 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear, the last bit of dialogue made my eyes burn just a little bit.
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Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i Love your work! And yeah, i agree with you, Souske shouLd've been Kaname's first kiss. But i had to admit though that Leonard Testarossa was H.O.T.! He seemed Like a gentLeman! But i found out he was a perv for steaLing Kana-chan's first kiss! i aLso Like the hug and Lemon! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm gonna let you in on a secret. It just so happens that my favourite anime is Inuyasha and I was looking for fanfics with Inu/Kag, but all I seem to be finding are Sess/Kag fics, which I DESPISE!!! So I decided, forget Inuyasha for now, and I'll go and find a fic in my second favourite anime, Full Metal Panic! Your story was the one that caught my fancy first, and even before I had finished reading it I LOVED IT. The diction was clear, grammar correct and the use of the figures of speech commendable. You have a talent for writing, and I thoroughly enjoyed your fic. My favourite part though was above all when you made them hug. It was brilliant such a simple action, but between Kaname and Sousuke a tremendous step. Keep writing and may GOD continue to bless your hands.
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Reviewed By: Gothic Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 04:02 CDT
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VERY GOOD!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Keribdis On: April 17, 2008 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there a higher raing then 10? You've definately earned it. I love your stories and once again you have amazed. I wouldn't have put the two of them in an intimate relationship by just watching the series, though the tension is there. Are you going to write a sequel? You know, what happens when they get back from Hong Kong and all that? It would be interesting to see how the two of them would react to being together again after all that happened. What would Sousuke's reaction to Leonard be or Kana's reaction to his almost second? They would definately tell each other about that, it's not something they would be good at keeping secret. Anyway, this was great. Keep writing, I will love to keep reading.
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Reviewed By: De On: April 09, 2008 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely fantastic! There aren't enough FMP fanfics out there, much less really good ones. Now I have one more on my list of "Favorites to Read".
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Reviewed By: Sybil On: April 07, 2008 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an incredible fic! I was completely drawn into it and the emotion of the moment was beautifully expressed. I seriously could have cried at the end. Something like this (but more PG) should have been included in the show. Keep up the great work. I hope you'll right more FMP!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 14:09 CDT
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oh man. really well done! i really enjoyed it!
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