Title: So Reviewed By: hfcs [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 01:23 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: So next time let me proofread it first... It's pretty good though. But your chapters are TOO SHORT. It's not leaving the crowd hanging, it's leaving the crowd FRUSTRATED. I like it. :) btw, you're not basing the characters off of people we actually know, right? like jeremy isn't either of the jeremys we know? anyways- comment one of MY stories now plz. i'm in the very beginning of that car crash story you wanted ilu 4eva & eva peaceeeeeeeeee :P
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