| "Foster Children" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 17:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
thank you for the update, i think this is a great story.
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this fanfic, it was really cool, you have to go on with it.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 12:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting. two things: 1.malapropisms, one of a few, you wrote 'fallow'(when a farmer doesn't plant a certain tract of land it is left 'fallow') you meant 'follow'. 2.she insisted on being 'kikyo' then rin introduced her to sango as 'kagome'. . . i'm curious to see where you are taking this.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 02:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a good story so far, although you do need to work on your spelling. is this going to be a kagome/sesshomaru story?
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