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| "Collapsed" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: CrimsonSin On: April 21, 2008 13:56 CDT
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Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
| Title: Zofo
Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 18:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
The formatting of the last two chapters was a bit off. Could you space the paragraphs out more? What happened to make Vegeta leave Bulma? He seems very secretive about it, though I'm sure you'll explain later on. Was he waiting for an opportunity to be with Goku and how does Goku feel about him? I'm itching to know more. Don't worry that this story is going to be long, I love a good epic. I'm shocked and saddened that you say this will be your last yaoi fic. Please reconsider.
| Title: Zofo
Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 17:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice start, getting rid of Chichi is always a plus in my books :-) Now he's free, what is Vegeta's situation?
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