| "Rise of A Ninja" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: K.T.S. On: May 28, 2008 21:24 CDT
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Improve your grammar and add more detail. Other than that, good work.
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Reviewed By: karakune On: May 15, 2008 18:32 CDT
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nice one dude! didn't expect that of naruto. i hope he would be ok
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Title: Answers to Comments
Reviewed By: Sasuke-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 04:41 CDT
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Yeah, I know I skip somethings, but it's wanted. I need to skip things, sometimes. Everybody knows how Tsunade got rescued and things, and I did flashbacks to make the Kyuubi character important My chapter won't be really long, I like to keep some suspense. And thanks Karakune! But yeah, Naruto is still a Genin if you watch the Shippuudens.
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Reviewed By: Deadberserker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 22:13 CDT
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This is a pretty good story, but your skipping around the timeline a little. I mean the Third dies and you don't bring up Naruto's and Jiraiya's travels to bring back Tsunade. Other then this its good but you should read Gravenimage's story its good.
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Reviewed By: karakune On: April 30, 2008 19:25 CDT
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Reviewed By: karakune On: April 30, 2008 19:24 CDT
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dude i loved it! i just find it to nice!but i didn't knew that naruto wasn't promoted to chuunin... continue like that!
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess its a good story since I'm a Naru/Saku fan but maybe you should make your chapters a little longer at least ten pages and hey if you want to read a good lemon story read mine story Tamming two hearst or breaking one its a Naru/Saku/Hina love triangle with nice lemons anyway update soon.
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