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| "Dragon Ball Z: The Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Pretty Good
Reviewed By: shadow_hearth [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a decent story, but moves quickly and is a bit erratic. While some people will enjoy the sex scenes (me one of them), they seem to be oddly placed. Spelling and Grammar needs to be rechecked; there is a lot of missing punctuation and sentences that don't make sense. Otherwise, it is well written and an interesting story, though it seems like something that has been done before. Definitely a good job though!
| Title: Looks Interesting
Reviewed By: shadow_hearth [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry! I don't mean to give such low ratings, but it's only because this story is incomplete! I would absolutely love to see more and see where this goes! I added it to my favorites, hoping to see this continue! :) Once you finish, I'll review this again!
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