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"The Adventures of Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]
 Title: Please Marry Me!
Reviewed By: suicidechild666 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 18, 2010 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
One I first saw the title, I laughed. It certainly caught me attention though. I couldn't stop reading it; never wanted to put it down. No other story has ever nor will ever do that like yours has. You've captured the characters so well and to this day and even after today, I'll continue to read it . . . Because it's just so damn good! All the emotion and effort you put into writing this has not gone in vain. Thank you so much for all your artistic ability. If it had been a book, I'd have bought not only for myself, but for my friends as well. I absolutely love you!
 Reviewed By: Bondage_Bunny_Misa [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 29, 2009 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Being someone who loves to read, and if the read is good, reads until their eyelids are screaming in bloody rampage as i force them open with chopsticks, this story captivated me. I couldn't wait to get home to read it. I just dug in my hill and refused to move. It should be publish and written as a book or novel or something and you should be rich and let me hug you and snuggle you until...i die. :) You made me laugh, cry and feel the pain the characters felt. I liked it because i kept my intrst. Thank you for being a REAL writer and artist. Not some half bake with author connections.
 Title: Best damn story
Reviewed By: Sean Wright [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 21, 2008 13:49 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It took me three days to read this story. I found it by accident, I had re-read parts of the first chapter twice and then I was hooked. I laughed, cried (because I would not dare leave this story unfinished for anything else) and I bit my nails in distress when I had to leave this story to work, sleep, or eat. You broke my heart, you captured my imagination, and finished this story as one satisfied reader. I would say more, but I overwhelmed from my enjoyment of this work. I have added it to my favorites since I know this is a story I will have to come back to one day for a good read. Sean
 Reviewed By: darkjewel [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 13, 2008 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
As a writer of slash pairings and non-cannon pairings, there is one compliment that I hold above all others, and I am giving it to you: I've been converted! I can now say that I love Roy x Ed. This story made me laugh so many times that I can't even remember them all (Colonel Spanky, I will never be able to look at Ed without seeing his drunk self running around in Mustang's uniform). Of course I also cried over it, which made the humor and romance even sweeter. A sweeping story that handled an unorthodox relationship quite well, stuck to the anime, and wound everything up in a less then perfect but realisitc happy ending. It's so hard to find multi-chap fanfiction like this, and I am delighted to have found yours. Thank you!

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