| "Bitter Sweet Sacrifice" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 21:27 CDT
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...well if you had read the authers note then you would have seen the request for a beta which helps with your grammer
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Reviewed By: .. On: May 31, 2008 01:19 CDT
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Nn well, this isn't mean to be an insult or anything but I think it would be a good idea if you has someone to check your spelling and sentences
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Reviewed By: narufreak1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 16:37 CDT
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i love it what happens next?it'll be good i will get ideas in my head which will make me mad cuz it awsome
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Reviewed By: sisterinlaw19*offline On: April 20, 2008 20:36 CDT
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hey your gunna update right?
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Reviewed By: demonfromhell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story. I haven't seen a DBZ Inuyasha crossover in a long time! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: kittey On: April 14, 2008 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it ^^. Very Nice! Can't wait to read what happens next. I keep coming up with scenerio's in my head hehe(has a bit of an over active imagination).
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Reviewed By: Crimson Alchemist On: April 12, 2008 23:05 CDT
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Please continue! Great start
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 13:21 CDT
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It' not a bad start! It's like it's gonna be a good story.
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