| "Ohayo San Francisco" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 16:06 CDT
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I love the chapter!!! Please, I'm begging you! Update more often! I love how Inuyasha acts and all, it's nice to see him stand up for himself, while Kagome acts like a complete bitch... I really think that Inuyasha puts up with a lot! And the clifhanger!!! EEEEEEK! I DESPISE cliffys!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 06:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mawh mawh ha ha, he sounds like a terrific stalker!!! Great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_Kagome_Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 02:09 CDT
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I want to ask is this inuyasha/kagome story. I want to know before I continued reading. I only reading inuyasha and kagome fanfiction. I am huge clay pot kikyhoe and kouga hater.
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Reviewed By: darkangel_riku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 21:56 CST
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I love it! I don't normally go for fanfics that make kagome a bad personality but I looove it! its not really her personality its how hooked she is on kouga to realize the man or hanyou in front of her. I just wonder how our poor hunk of inuyasha is going to handle this...lol keep writing please! lol I'll be waiting for the next update on another note ima not sure if you know this or not. and please don't take offense bc everything else corprated to japan is on the dot and veeeery well written some discriptions made me feel back in japan. but ohayo is really spelt ohaiyou in the real form, is sorta like hai, lol spelt the same way but that is more the traditional way of spelling it...that's the way I was taught by my sensei how to spell it a least. I could be wrong :) but anywho! looove it! haha update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 05:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh I was wondering why Kagome would go threw with the marriage... great reason why...
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 23:11 CST
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I am sooo sorry about your friends!!! That must be so awful for you. Good chapter, update soon!!! XD
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I'm sorry to hear about your friends. I'll definitely be praying for them. I actually have a friend who went over to India for a wedding, too so reading about the Mumbai attacks and how the airports and stuff came under fire has me holding my breath like, "Damn, I really hope she's okay." It's nerve-wracking and I'm wowed/in awe of your friend Veer for going through what he/she did. In lighter(ish) fic-related news...Holy shiz! You deliver, as always, with an amazing chapter. I loved the wedding/mate-ceremony and the use of creative-license when it came to writing it (the mixing of their auras was really, really cool) and the controversy with other youkai. Very nice. As for Kagome, kudos on some quick thinking to get out of the actual consummation of the marriage but she's such a bitch! I'm here thinking she's gonna be nice and just fool around with Kouga or something on the side but she totally led InuYasha on before just up and letting him HAVE it. Surely our boy won't stand for that, will he? Let's see some of that Inu-youkai temper next chapter! He's the son of an Inu-no-Taisho...she should be honored to breathe his air! The reaction of the family should be pretty interesting too..and lets not forget Kouga! But most importantly, InuYasha. You are soooooo evil for leaving this on a cliffhanger, but don't mind me...I'll still be teetering on my seat when you get back. Seriously though, I hope everything on your end turns out for the best. I'm not exactly devout, but I'll pray for both our friends, lost or otherwise, and you of course. Again, my condolences if they help. ~Amber :/
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... looks like the ceremony is done but no mating happened... also seems that kagome's true colors came out in the end telling inuyasha what she really thinks and in front of her parents too... what will happen now... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 04:25 CST
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OMFG!!! You MUST update quickly!!! I LOVE it!!! I love everything about it!!! PLEASE UPDATE, I'M BEGGING YOU!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 02:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... things seems not to be going kagome's way... and sesshoumaru is suspicious about her behavior... but nice of him to talk with inuyasha and being a big brother... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"And, once we are mated you will never feel the need to look at another." HAHA! Someone...not to point any elbows at a certain inuhanyou...is getting pretty cocky. ;) Great to see an update on this! *shakes head* But poor Kagome. I recommend she not quit her day job because her plans to seduce the inu brothers was an EPIC failure. I'm surprised she didn't go after their father :P The wedding is next chapter, too. Right? Can't wait for it! Till then! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty (at hell aka School) On: November 10, 2008 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea!!! great chapter... Trying too get Sessy to help her out... and FAIL miserably...
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Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two words: Great chapter! You have a way with words. The beggining of the chapter was strong and I especially enjoyed how you described Kagome's facination with her country. It's obvious that you must have done A LOT of research for this chap because it felt authentically Japenese, for me anyway. I commend you! One thing that made me a little nervous was the fact that Kagome felt like a "Hollywood Girl," as in a stupid girl who only cares for petty things like money, fastion, and ego-gratification. However, that changed when you showed that she does apprecialte culture, though I still worry that she's going to be one of those irritable ladies, this made me even more nervous for Inuyasha, especially after you described his thoughts on himself and his life, but I guess she was still Kagome in the end so all is well. I'm a stickler for dramatic entrences and boy was that an interesting meeting. Mind you, I wouldn't mind having a cute boy fall at my feet. Also, I couldn't help but laugh at the potential "Suitors" Daddy Higurashi had lined up. Very clean writing. I barely found mistakes. However, I did say that I was picky. I don't believe in love at first sight. Though I understand the reason for Inuyasha's attachment, I await to see how he will take Kagome's little plan, and I'm curious to know just what her scheme is. I warned you that I don't pull punches when reviewing sometimes, I hope I didn't offend you in any way, and I hope you liked my review. My computer is wierd, so if this reivew comes up more then once, I'm sorry. Jian.
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Reviewed By: PinkIcePrincess23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love this story...I love Kouga! I love that Sesshy is such a butt...but hot...and I love how Inuyasha is soooo sweet and yet still himself! Can't wait for Kags to finally fall for him....Please update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha, you had me scared there when Kagome's dad introduced her to sesshomaru. Interesting twist though, I definetely didn't expect it. And aww!InuYasha is like a little kid in this chapter, it's cute. Kind of messed up though how Kagome defends Inu to her father in one breath then insults him in the next ("he's a rustic!") but I guess her anger is justified in that she really doesn't wanna marry anyone other than Kouga. Can't wait for the next chapter. ~Amber :)
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Reviewed By: ghoulgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It's so interesting. Can't wait to see the plan and Kouga's reaction when he finds out. :D
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 17:49 CDT
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When is she going to meet Inuyasha?
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow...Kaggie's dad is just rude, decieving his daughter like that...but I love it. And I love this story :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome's father is a little scary.... keep up with the good work!!
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 14:01 CDT
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hey, nice picture and I have some OCs if you're interested!
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 13:49 CDT
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A very interesting story, I'm a major I/K fan but I like K/K too. A good spin and quite a web you've woven so far.
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 08:47 CDT
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Awesome story I cant wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it i can tell its going to be a great story! update soon
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Reviewed By: hans 349 On: April 20, 2008 22:44 CDT
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wow this is pretty good keep it up I hope it goes somewhere real soon
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is def going on my favorites list. GREAT first chapter...I can't wait what happens though when Yash makes his appearance. Till next chappie :)
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