| "Of Stars and Wishes" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Short, but good
Reviewed By: Lady Taurucis [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 18:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
A good way to lead into something more interesting (a fight? an argument? or something else) in my view.
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Title: I 4-got somethin'!
Reviewed By: Sami-SDGForce [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost 4-got 2 tell u somethin'. U see, I paired Captain w/ Tei, & Sami w/ Shute. P.S.: Sami & Bell Wood r cousins.
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Reviewed By: Lady Taurucis [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 09:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Off to a good start, I'd say. (Wow I'm horrible at writing reviews x_x) These first two chapters have gotten my curiosity now, I'm looking forwards to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Zero101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 20:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry about the late update, ^^; this sounds interesting... Yet another world in peril by some form of evil. Please update soon and I can't wait until the next chapter!!! XD
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