| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Title: Amazed!!
Reviewed By: The_Red_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 10:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply extraordinary! I loved the latest chapter! You writing style is almost lyrical, i love it! The way you relate Bulma and Vegeta's relationship is incredible, i've only read a handful of stories that have portrayed their relationship so well. Keep up the good work and please update as soon as possible!!
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Title: Luvin it!!!!!!
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: July 13, 2008 12:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is fabulous. The dinner scene was well thought out and had me emotionally attached. I can't wait to see where Vegeta will take Bulma. Update real soon plez.
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Title: This is the best fic I have read in the past 3 years
Reviewed By: Ally92 On: July 06, 2008 22:10 EDT
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Woo hoo!! Can not wait for the next chapter. Awesome story!!
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Reviewed By: keleos On: July 05, 2008 23:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
His strong hands grabbed her delicately, pressing her against him and embellishing her in the soft indigo of his power. They remained like that for a few seconds, merely hovering like a soft blue star in the middle of the night, their heartbeats struggling to pound in unison .... I am speechless, this is so beautiful! I love the character interaction!! So IC!!! + I love your style AAAAAAAAAAAnd.... I wonder where they're going now? (metaphorically speaking too LOL) >>> Thank you so much for updating!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 03:11 EDT
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Wow, this was so intense. You are really something, I wonder how you get to make the story this amazing. Please continue!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 22:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absoultely LOVE this story!! Bulma and Vegeta have the most intersting relationship on DBZ and you have portrayed that sooo well! Cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Adg06 On: July 03, 2008 15:10 EDT
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chapter 8= absolute greatness =)
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Reviewed By: Annaxx On: July 03, 2008 14:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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loooved it, please dont take long to update :)
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Title: Simply wonderful!!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 09:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I've got several things to say about this chapter! First of all, parents are SO embarrassing! Poor Bulma; having to endure hearing when she did dance recitals and such, and in front of Vegeta of all people! And when Bulma's Mom & Dad came home and she [her mom] opened her big fat mouth! Wow, I think Bulma's Mom is a super freak asking all those intruding questions! And what is the deal with Bulma lying?? Who is she trying to convince? And who would be embarrassed about being with a fine specimen like Vegeta?? The way you write him, I'd love to have him crash at my place! I did get a little pissed with the things Bulma said, that was really hurtful. But payback is a bitch! Vegeta is making her eat her own words each and every night, that's for sure! I love the part when you say that he was evil, brilliant! The dinner party scene when they're eating, I was drooling as you described Vegeta's thigh…and the little foot play under the table was HOT. Okay… The ending was superb, a little surprising that Bulma would throw herself off the roof, but more surprising is how Vegeta reacted! Ah, the incredible awesomeness of this story is sublime and enthralling… thank you so much for not letting me die this weekend with this update (and for plugging my name in your notes, squee!)! Have a wonderful July 4th weekend, and I'll end this review with the all famous line that every reviewer gives but writers hate to read: UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 02:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it how she actually threw herself. i can't wait for the next chapter you've got me on pins & needles
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Reviewed By: Lou85 On: July 02, 2008 13:52 EDT
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Oh. My. God. This fic is so hot and well written that I just wanted to say to you that I love you. I was beginning to lose hope that any new good B/V fics could be written these days, but thankfully I came across this wonderful fic. Please update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 11:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! BEFORE I DIE!!!
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Title: Kinky sh!t
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: June 30, 2008 13:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your fics. Thank you so much for the updates. Chapters 6 & 7 are fabulous but you know I had to go back and read 5, you know for research...Can't wait for the next update. Your style in writing and the way you turn everyday Vegeta and Bulma into a kinky, battle of the IQ's is intense and I love it. Keep up the great work. Can't wait for Chapter 8 and 9 and 10 and 11 and 12 and you get the idea. Later
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Title: yeah!
Reviewed By: MonkeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this is wonderful. I hope you're planning on continuing. I love this pairing so much. I haven't read a DBZ fic in forever, but I will always love Vegeta and Bulma. :) I love the plot and your style of writing.
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 16:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the fact you touch on all the senses and your words paint a pic of a lovecrazed woman dozing off at work thinking of something irrelevant to the present matter. i loved those details. great work.
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