| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 12:39 EDT
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Wow! Wonderful chapter! I had the goosebumps reading how much fun Bulma have been having... I would be a daze too, lucky girl! And what's the deal with Yamcha calling her? Ugh, and she said she loved him within a ear-shot of Vegeta!!! I was like "Oh my God!" When she turned around and he was sitting up! Vegeta may come off being a guy that doesn't care; but I know he would probably hurt anyone that tries to mess with Bulma now. Thanks for this update, it was just what I needed to get through this weekend! Until next update! Bye!
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Reviewed By: keleos On: June 21, 2008 22:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AM BAAAAACK! Will write a proper review later, I swear!!! Just letting you know how much I'm in love with this ff!!!! XD
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 13:16 EDT
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I'm going to be NEEDING an update. Like really fast. :D
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 15:03 EDT
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Wonderful chapter! I just love the way this is going, it has such a nice structure and your style is just amazing. Absolutely enjoyable! Looking forward.
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 13:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
crazy. interesting morning after. thank god there wasn't any regret from his part. lol. i can already see the hardships awaiting our favorite couple. i fucking love the way you write and you choose each word to fit the syntax and the mood.
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Title: SQUEE!!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 08:08 EDT
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Lovely chapter six!!! Wow, I'm so jealous of Bulma!!! I like the take on the whole 'marking' thing with Vegeta... you read so many with him biting her, so this explaination was nothing I heard before. Can't wait for the next chapter, but I have to... so until then keep up the great work with this brillant story! Cheers!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Ally92 On: June 05, 2008 18:34 EDT
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awesome fic!
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Reviewed By: Meanlilkitty On: May 28, 2008 22:22 EDT
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Damn, that lemon was so good it left me dizzy afterward. I'm saving this one!
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Title: HOT!
Reviewed By: Tiffy On: May 28, 2008 20:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a fuckin genius this chapter had to b one of the best written b ulma and vegeta sex scenes!!!!!!! it was sooo HOT!!! I loved it beyond words! cant wait for more!!!!
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 07:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done! This is got to be the HOTTEST B/V chapter ever written the history of all time! Honestly, girl you really wrote your ass off on that one. I was very pleased! So pat yourself on the back... I cannot wait for chapter six, becasue there is always fun in the 'morning after' element! But please don't make it so predictiable like all these B/V stories... making him not wanting to be with her after all the fun they had! Unitl next chapter, cheers!!! @_@ ~gokusgirl
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Reviewed By: keleos On: May 27, 2008 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Are you asking me if I MINDED the lemon! Holy shit that was hottt! And I don't know, something MORE than just lemon... it's hard to explain (it might be because I've been dying to read this ch and you just made my day!!) I just love the way you write, the dialogue is great, the anticipation is great, the background is great, the thoughts are great... and you keep both Bulma and Vegeta SO in character! Thank you so much!
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Title: AAAAH! WOWWY!
Reviewed By: TheShinonbiyoru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya! This is great! I hate it when Vegeta's all 'Namfy Pamfy' gets on my nerves. I love it when he rough like this :D After all that's who he is, so we shouldn't change him ;) Can't wait for the 'morning after,' it should prove to be amusing-hehe! A joy to read! Please keep writing! LOVE IT! Katania a.k.a Shin xx
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 10:50 EDT
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Oh God, that was scorching hot!!!! Jeez Caprice, this was just awesome. Damn, great job.
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Reviewed By: taity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 10:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy sh't!! My laptop has caught fire!! Damn that was HOT!!!
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Title: More!
Reviewed By: shadow_hearth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 01:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! The lemon really was the perfect touch to this story! Please, I can't wait to see more!
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