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| "Whenever You Call Series: -5- Warmth" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Mockorange7 On: April 20, 2008 14:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this series--each story is lovely, and I particularly like the friendship with Wufei as much as I am engaged by the growing relationship between Duo and Heero--I am very much looking forward to more!
| Reviewed By: QUEQUEQUE On: April 14, 2008 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Absolutely, breathtakingly beautiful. Your story is impressively well-crafted. I especially liked how you jumped between different periods in time without overusing the page-break feature: it was simply one long, connected narrative. Very nice. Though the subject matter wasn't exactly avant-garde (two pilots having nightmares is not exactly new in Gundam Wing, lol), the way you handled it is. You have the rare skill of being an actual storyteller, and I look forward to reading your other pieces. LOADi
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