| "Unknown Forces" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Mitka13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2010 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and pairing, but i have 1 question. WHY DOES IT TAKE YOU SO LONG TO UPDATE?! THIS IS WAY TOO MUCH SUSPENSE!
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Lol ih ave one question though. How does Sess know what an atomic bomb is? Lol, also I like that line "Oh yeah, life hated him hardcore". I'll have to use that when my mom is bugging me. LOL!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: pearlrose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD! MORE, MORE, MOOORRRE! Seriously, this is some very good stuff. I hope you write the next chapter soon.
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Title: HOT!!!!!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that chapter was amazing!!!!!!!!!! I love it that now sesshy and itachi are now mated!!! I cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 18:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
uh-oh spaghettio!! update soon. hot lemon ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have never put these two together, but you're doing a mighty fine job at it! ^_^ Keep up the good work, let me know when you put up your next chapter, kinoko_thelittlemushroom@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Vampiress_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. Interesting pairing never thought of it but shockingly it seems like its gonna be a good one. So in other words KEEP WRITING THIS FIC PLEASE!!!!
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