Reviewed By:ShadowBlade539 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 10:47 CDT Comment/Review: I like what youve done so far can't what to read what you have next and I'm sure some one might tell you this later but you sai he was 15 in the fist chapter and that 5 years past but now your saying his 18 just thought you'd like to know.
Reviewed By: spiritwolf31 On: April 19, 2008 18:46 CDT Comment/Review: So far what little you did sound pretty good but you screwed up with the age in the story you he was now fifteen (15) and then 5 years 10 months and 8 days later ok the mistake is you now said he is 18 so how can he be 18 when he was 15 and 5yrs have passed wouldn`t he be 20 years old just wanted to let you know and please next time you update that is if you actually update could you actually make the chapter longer please
