| "Be Careful What Wish For" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: decemberangel16 On: November 26, 2008 10:59 CST
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this is a great story. i can't wait to read more!! plz update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 02:13 CDT
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the mediaminer gremlins must have been at it again and ate all of your 'line breaks'! you know, the spaces that all authors put between their paragraphs so that their work is easy to read and looks pretty. ♦ please, if it is the formatting that won't let you do it then put a period or dash at the beginning of each blank line between paragraphs (then you will have line breaks even if there is a period on the blank line it's better than having your text run together) then i won't lose my place so easily while i read your work. ♣ intriguing, i'm curious why kagome is alive in the past when the well works consecutively unless it allowed her to go back before kagome died. and why is she trying to kill everybody? naraku's alive? so many details to enlighten us with as your tale progresses. ♥ thank you, ginny
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Title: YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THATS AN ORDER
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 23:39 CDT
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NOW I WANT A NEW CHAPTER THIS IS AWSOME
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 19:51 CDT
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this sounds like a great story, is inuyasha the girls father? if so why is there no mention of her having puppy ears or something? i really like this story so far and hope to read more very soon.
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