| "Court or Caught?" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: February 09, 2011 12:07 EST
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I wondered how you would get the characters to act like they did in groundhog day! Excellent job! The only part that I'm still a little sad about is poor Uryuu. While Renji and Rukia end up back together, and obviously 'hime and Ichigo keep trying to end up together, I haven't read anything else about Uryuu and Tatsuki. :P |
Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: February 08, 2011 10:45 EST
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The game that the group is playing really really rocks. I like how it is only showing the worst senario and only the worst. Nicely done! |
Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: May 21, 2009 16:59 EDT
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I have re read this at least three times. It's very entertaining. The character relationships and dialogue are spot on. I particularly like how you incorporated Renji into the early Bleach group and saw how he interacted with everyone. Orihime and Uryuu's friendship was sweet. I felt b ad for him not ending up with her. But I love the idea of him and Tatsuke pairing off. And you did great writing Orihime as a well balanced character. Awesome job.
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Title: stop taking breaks
Reviewed By: BerserkRonin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 09:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing you silly man, I must keep reading!
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Title: im the first reviewer! ^-^v
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 22:00 EST
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just read it, and i must say, your awesome! but only few people notice it!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 14:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh. This is one is pretty cute. If I were going to layout how a real date goes this would be about right. Especially group dates. Really liked this mostly for the interplay and handling of teenage characters who act like teenage characters *gasp!*. That's not very easy to do so I'm very impressed. What was most striking was how Ichigo went from having a crush on Rukia to shifting it to Orihime without the whole 'it's destiny!' baloney.
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Reviewed By: xsakura On: September 09, 2008 12:54 EDT
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Okay. Did you put a cloning machine on Bleach? The characters are simply perfect. Except for a few little details, especially on Tatsuki and Keigo, but I think that's because they probably have less than 5 episodes screen time in total. And you don't really hate Uryu. He is a really twisted/warped/shady/weird person. The clones are pieces of art, and Renji really is a masterpiece. You also use the same language and structure as the subbers/scanlators, which makes your fanfic very nice to read. I really hope you're going to do more than 8 chapters, I love this fanfic ^.^
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Reviewed By: xsakura On: September 09, 2008 12:29 EDT
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[just finished chapter 5] Wait 'til I'm done with chapter 6, then you'll get a serious review from me.
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Reviewed By: xsakura On: September 08, 2008 14:09 EDT
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[just finished chapter 4] You really do hate Uryu.
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Reviewed By: xsakura On: September 08, 2008 13:39 EDT
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[just finished chapter 3] GREAT manga titles. But One Piece? I'll kick yer ass for that.
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Reviewed By: xsakura On: September 08, 2008 13:17 EDT
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[just finished chapter 2] Do you hate Uryu or something? You are SO ebil xD
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Title: please
Reviewed By: BerserkRonin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep writing for this story, I'm hooked and I wanna read more. plus I'm one of the few fans that think ichigo and orihime should hook up. thank you for writing such a well done story. I promise to keep leaving reviews with each story you write, so please keep adding chapters.
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Reviewed By: me?...nah! On: April 24, 2008 23:12 EDT
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nice one...fluff are good...(sometimes)^-^
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