Reviewed By:Weapon-01 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 23:38 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: Your story was written exceptionally well, no misspellings at all, thought it is hard to tell in my head what the difference is between narration and thought. Something to consider. Keep Writing!