Title: ehhh...
Reviewed By: star_struck [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay hun, (I call everyone that, it is not meant to sound patronizing) but you really really suck at spelling. My recomendation to you would be to get a spell check program AND a beta. There are several places that you can easily find a beta. Hell, just put it in one of your A/Ns and ask for one. This will all greatly improove your stories. I suggest you slow it down when you are creating them, and put more time and effort into double checking over them and re-reading your stories before you post them. Proof-reading is a marvelous thing...a very handy tool to writers everywhere. If you can't find the beta and a decent spell checker, at least use 'WORD'. It kinda sucks, but it would help more than what you already have going on. I beg of you to take my advice. Take this story down, improove it with a spell check and/or beta, then repost, because all in all it is a pretty decent story.
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