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| "Minutes to Midnight" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: Sorrow-chan On: February 24, 2009 02:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've gotta be kiddin' me! It seems so... short. *dies a little* I can't wait 'till the next chappy! XD Lots of Love, Sorrow
| Reviewed By: sweetdeily (not logged in) On: September 14, 2008 06:44 CDT
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Uhm, well I only got five chapters in because I was at the point that the characters had turned so utterly OOC it was painful. The talk with Urahara and Ichigo was completely OOC, Ichigo started off pretty good in the first chapter and then went downhill, he got to a point where he was abnormally irritated about every tiny little thing- like he was a chick PMSing- and then followed with him blushing and tittering like a teenaged girl asking someone out. Ugh, the way he was acting just started to bother me- Gin was pretty good for character and so were most of the others, I liked what you were doing with the plot and it definitely had a lot of potential, but badly done characterization just ruined the whole fic for me. I couldn't keep reading- my image of Ichigo just wouldn't suffer it. Also, it's very n00bish to use Japanese suffix when you're writing in English, either write it all in Japanese or English. Aside from words that have no English equivalent (like hakama, which is hakama in English) it's better to just cut them out altogether. But I do see a lot of potential in your writing, don't stop writing just because you need work, I'd like to see you reach your potential.
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 22:30 CDT
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Poor Kira-kun. No wonder he was so angry with the little-taicho. Well, now he's back with his Taicho, and everything is as it should be. I have to wonder though, why Aizen never went back for Momo. She loved him so much, I can't help but wonder if he will in the near future. Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, I finally finished. I love that there are captians that are starting to suspect something. Continuing our discussion from last night, I don't mind a Renji/Orihime pairing either. I'm pretty open minded, as far as pairings go, I just never could get into M/M. I can do a M/F/M pairing on occaision. I still read the steamy scenes because, like I said, it's written so well. It just doesn't get my hentai blood pumping like a het pairing does. Now, I have to wonder how long it will take for three certain taichos to sneak to the twelveth division and use that gate to Hecuo Mundo. Knowing Zaraki, there will be no sneaking involved. lol.
| Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short, cute and sweet. *Grins* Nice
| Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My quite a bit of information...very informative. So does Gin have a subscription to Shounen Jump or does he go to the local super market. lol. Thats so awesome. Later.
| Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay very good so far. You have me very intrigued but one question...Why did he leave Soul Society? I guess I'll have to wait to see what happens.
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