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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, wow. That was heavy. Great update(s), definitely worth the wait. can't wait until the next one!
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Reviewed By: randall On: October 12, 2008 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good job i look forward to reading the rest
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2008 15:53 CDT
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Man...that was an amazing story...definently an interesting story ince when ever people think abuse of a couple its usually the man and not the woman who does it...so sad at the end though...i feel like I want more to know what happens to the kids as they grow up and what goes on between byakuya and ichigo...well guess that means i will have to read more of your stuff huh..XD...cant wait to read more juicy goodness
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2008 00:34 CDT
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Great chapter, love it so far. though i wonder how long the divorce papers will remain forgotten... Update soon!
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Reviewed By: TheSorrowfulVampress [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 09:23 CDT
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Mah... That was great. I absolutely loved it.
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Reviewed By: TheSorrowfulVampress [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? I'm addicted...
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 23:27 CDT
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We are coming to a conclusion, yay! I like how it's going. personally, I'm ichiruki, but you're a great writer, and i really do ike this story. I think the status became complete again, and I'm pretty sure that wasn't the last chapter. Anyway, until your next update!
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A. This is a great fic. And honestly, i think this is how they would act as adults, er, ichigo at least. the others are a few centuries past. B. Why is the status completed? I was disappointed when it turned out that it wasn't. Anyway, can't wait till your next update. :]
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Reviewed By: Bunnisteffi On: September 02, 2008 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So pass the damn sake, alright. THIS HAS BEEN GOING ON FOR TOO HMing LONG FOR POOR ICHIGO. Lordy. It's getting on my nerves just seeing him like that. And hearing/reading all that gossip. Y'know, I actually got incensed just by reading the ones 'bout Rukia... Ugh. I think I've said something this once in a previous review, but I'll say it again: I don't know where you're heading with this story, and I am glad that you haven't stated the main pairing in your summary, like many fic writers do. But whether Ichigo will go with Byakuya, or should he get Rukia back in the end, I have abso-no objections now. Which I would have had, were it not your fic that I've been following. And so, please, keep it going. If it'll lengthen this story, don't resolve things so quickly, then. Ho hum.
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Title: great fic
Reviewed By: AkiraCat13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 20:05 CDT
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Your fic is a really good one. Is ichigo and byakuya going to fall in love?*laughs*byakuyas awesome...anyway I hope you're going to update soon!
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Reviewed By: Bunnisteffi On: June 19, 2008 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if you're planning to bring Rukia-sama back. I don't know if I would like her back. Yes, I suppose, if Ichigo's family isn't going to go down the gutter. Are you slanting towards an Ichigo/Byakuya pairing I sincerely hope not... (>.
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Reviewed By: cricketchick1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely brilliant, a twist on abuse that is rarely seen. The children have been written really well, which is a nice change from the usual, and everything is portrayed so nicely!! I can't wait for more, and hopefully it's really really soon, or I shall surely die. After beating you over the head with a stick. That'd go well with the story wouldn't it? I can't wait to see where you take this, and I'm gonna follow this on FF.net so will see you over there!
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! I was so surprised when I actually witnessed (well more like read) Rukia strike Ichigo. I will admit I got pretty upset here. I was so wanting Yumichika to storm in but when Matsumoto stopped him I felt even more angry. So I'm guessing the next thing that happens is Byakuya is going to hear about the incident right? Now Ukitake is going to have to confront Rukia too right? Aarrgh! Sorry still lightly seething... One more thing, in the story after Rukia stormed into Ichigo's office and threw some things at him you said two items were broken but the only thing you mentioned was the ink well. So, what was the second thing? On a more happier note, Ukitake and Kira. So cute and they want to adopt a kid. Awww, they are so cute! Okay, *sighs because chapter is done and still remembering what I just read* you did such a great job. Sorry if I seem to depress you. I don't mean to honest ^_^
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I feel so bad for Ichigo. Sorry but I can't help it. I mean is all the work load Rukia's carrying too much for her? If so she should at least ask for help...never mind. ^_^
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Ichigo seems so mature its kinda scary. Kidding. I wonder if Ukitake knows what is going on since Rukia seems to be going to work early? So Orihime and Renji are together, thats cool I bet their kids will have bright red hair. Maybe even redder than Renji's is now. Sorry I'm babbling.
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