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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I loved every aspect of the story and your research paid off...Plus the thing you talked about here were valid and I agree that you shouldnt have made any changes...I cant wait for your next story since I know its going to be great...keep up the good work and bravo to a job well done XD
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2009 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was amazing...it was so well written and all my questions were answered for what they were planning to do with their lives when the children got older and even more with Rukia...wasnt expecting that...overall wonderfull story and I will add u to my fav.authors so I can keep up with your new work...thanks again for writing this...it was definently a treat XD
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 18:39 CST
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yay...he finally amitted his love...so much MOE!!!! I wish that this was a doujinshi cause you described it sooooo well XD I cant wait to read more and find out what they plan to do with getting together and telling the kids (which is always hard) so update soon XD
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 12:52 CST
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Great update. I loved the way you integrated the apology between Kaien and Jyuu, without being directly there but rather watching as Ichigo also watched and conversed with Byakuya. And yay for Byakuya for completely standing up ti his grandmother. Update soon! P.S. I envy your talent in the characterization of the characters.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 00:51 CST
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well I am glad that kaien and jyushiro are at better terms now that is always hard...it was also nice to have a less depressing chapter but u know how I love them anyway...thanks for updating and as usual I cant wait for the next chapter to go up so do your best!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful, i don't think there's any other word for it. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 14:42 CST
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oh man that was an intense chapter...but i got everyones emotions and it was an awesome read...now I just need more cause I want to know where your going to take this from here...so update soon pweeeezzzzzz
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 00:17 CST
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wow...even though it has been a while for an update you are still amazing at getting the emotions just right...i applaude your greatness...I hope everyone starts to feel a little better but this is such a serious issue I can see how it goes...but keep up the good work...I cant wait for another chapter
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 15:31 CST
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By the way, i think you do a great job in keeping the characters in-character, and with the emotions involved in each situation.
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 15:30 CST
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Another beautiful update. I feel so sad for ichigo and byakuya, especially after byakuya's revelation(though i was hoping it would be before her death). I hope Shirosaki doesn't come out soon... Update soon!
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Reviewed By: *zetsuii* On: October 28, 2008 01:18 CDT
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Omg I cried so much it was so heartrenching and beautiful you did a wonderful job and i cant wait for another chapter so update soon ok...I cant imagine the pain of loosing a mother and i hope not to experience that pain for along time and i think you did an amazing job getting everyones emotions just right cause I could feel there pain and i cried with them...i cant wait for more though cause it makes me want to have my heart comforted by byakuyashi as well...so update soon ok XD
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 23:58 CDT
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OMG...I wanted to cry...that was so good yet so sad...once i saw the chapter title though i was like "oh crap" but god I wonder what ichigo is going to do...so please update...the suspense is killing me
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, wow. That was heavy. Great update(s), definitely worth the wait. can't wait until the next one!
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Reviewed By: randall On: October 12, 2008 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good job i look forward to reading the rest
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2008 15:53 CDT
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Man...that was an amazing story...definently an interesting story ince when ever people think abuse of a couple its usually the man and not the woman who does it...so sad at the end though...i feel like I want more to know what happens to the kids as they grow up and what goes on between byakuya and ichigo...well guess that means i will have to read more of your stuff huh..XD...cant wait to read more juicy goodness
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