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Title: Yes!
Reviewed By: lil jynx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2010 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its me again, and i must tell you, i have become obbsessed with you and your story! I applaude you for doing what i could not. Kaeep it up! i notice that you are writing in the Queen's English and this makes me love the story more! Excelent flow and coherency. Amazing plot and ideas. even the subplot is great. :)
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: lil jynx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2010 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit! you got fantasies or something? This chapter was so graphic (chpt 1)and as bad as i felt, i couldnt stop laughing! i really enjoyed it and imma keep reading. I think its evil that she will e a perpetual virgin, doomed to be forever raped but its funny!And i love how Aien is a stalliion, cumming up to 5 times in a day? wow! as i said, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2010 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh. Good job of leading up to this ending. At first it seemed kinda sudden but when Orihime reacted to Stark's disinterest it all made sense and things just clicked. Though for all of Aizen's scheming, he certainly was being pretty stupid if all it took to take him down was 'that' (though I don't know any guy who wouldn't be down on their knees after something like that). I like this for it's pschological build up but I feel sad for Orihime. She finally has her peace but for a steep cost.
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Reviewed By: mellymel On: March 14, 2010 16:02 CDT
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This is a really good story. It has a well developed plot and the writing style is excellent. Good job. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: elwfjkle On: December 23, 2009 17:48 CST
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can someone link me to this authors fanfic page?
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Reviewed By: laika On: December 03, 2009 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"It's easier than planning the overthrow of the great Imperialist society by flooding the global market with ill fitting shoes." ...marry me?
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Reviewed By: cc On: September 30, 2009 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm kind of curious where you're going with this. There's a lot of characters at play and its tough to tell what their true role will be and how Orihime will be really be affected by this, no matter what Aizen predicts. Even though Ulquiorra is sweet, its hard not to root for Grimmjow. He has his own sort of innocence in his simplicity and straightforwardness. Grimmjow has passion and Ulquiorra has possession, but I doubt anyone there loves her. Who will bother to help her, then? Can she help herself?
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: UlquihimeGirl On: September 02, 2009 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the Ulquihime/Grimmhime parts immensely. At first I thought that Orihime was too...er... Willing after being raped so soon. The idea with the drugged water was brilliant and clarified her behavior and personality change. One problem I have is that I can't tell if Tosen is blind or not, just by your writing. Does he have sight in this story? Do you think that you could add more Ulquihime scenes? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: mortalshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2009 20:44 CDT
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I love this fic Grimmjow and Ulquiorra are two of my favourite characters.Surely you realise that Tousen is blind in Bleach I'm assuming you gave him eyesight for the purpose of this story. Please update soon :)
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Reviewed By: tin tin On: August 05, 2009 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all that i can say is that i've read your other story on ff.net as well. you should definitely continue writing! i like your styles and inventive ideas as well as your looks into everyone's persona, and of course the smut! update and it would make my world! :DD -sincerely, God
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Reviewed By: mellymel On: June 27, 2009 18:54 CDT
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I'm really impressed with this story. It's about more than the sex, there's a deep psychological aspect as well. Grimmjow is smart enough to realize that someone's lying, hopefully he'll make the right choice.
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Title: wtf where's the next chapter
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg this was such a good fic. Write more please yay
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Reviewed By: chelsea-chee On: June 02, 2009 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! Must you leave it there?! I must say, very good job on it. I truly only love the Grimmjow/Orihime moments, so I petiton there must be more of them! lol! Anyways, update when you can! Thanxs! :) p ;)
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Reviewed By: gundamngirl On: March 06, 2009 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is probably the only though out "harem" I've ever read. Excellent!
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Title: .
Reviewed By: pennnnnny On: January 24, 2009 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOOOOWWWWWWWW!!! ...awww gin!
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