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Reviewed By: cc On: September 30, 2009 09:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm kind of curious where you're going with this. There's a lot of characters at play and its tough to tell what their true role will be and how Orihime will be really be affected by this, no matter what Aizen predicts. Even though Ulquiorra is sweet, its hard not to root for Grimmjow. He has his own sort of innocence in his simplicity and straightforwardness. Grimmjow has passion and Ulquiorra has possession, but I doubt anyone there loves her. Who will bother to help her, then? Can she help herself?
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: UlquihimeGirl On: September 03, 2009 00:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the Ulquihime/Grimmhime parts immensely. At first I thought that Orihime was too...er... Willing after being raped so soon. The idea with the drugged water was brilliant and clarified her behavior and personality change. One problem I have is that I can't tell if Tosen is blind or not, just by your writing. Does he have sight in this story? Do you think that you could add more Ulquihime scenes? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: mortalshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2009 21:44 EDT
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I love this fic Grimmjow and Ulquiorra are two of my favourite characters.Surely you realise that Tousen is blind in Bleach I'm assuming you gave him eyesight for the purpose of this story. Please update soon :)
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Reviewed By: tin tin On: August 05, 2009 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all that i can say is that i've read your other story on ff.net as well. you should definitely continue writing! i like your styles and inventive ideas as well as your looks into everyone's persona, and of course the smut! update and it would make my world! :DD -sincerely, God
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Reviewed By: mellymel On: June 27, 2009 19:54 EDT
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I'm really impressed with this story. It's about more than the sex, there's a deep psychological aspect as well. Grimmjow is smart enough to realize that someone's lying, hopefully he'll make the right choice.
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Title: wtf where's the next chapter
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg this was such a good fic. Write more please yay
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Reviewed By: chelsea-chee On: June 02, 2009 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! Must you leave it there?! I must say, very good job on it. I truly only love the Grimmjow/Orihime moments, so I petiton there must be more of them! lol! Anyways, update when you can! Thanxs! :) p ;)
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Reviewed By: gundamngirl On: March 06, 2009 11:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is probably the only though out "harem" I've ever read. Excellent!
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Title: .
Reviewed By: pennnnnny On: January 24, 2009 21:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOOOOWWWWWWWW!!! ...awww gin!
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Title: awesome!!
Reviewed By: schifferrr On: January 24, 2009 21:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome plot, characters and hottttt.
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Reviewed By: akai-jin On: November 04, 2008 12:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot story ha ha keep it up please
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Title: nice...
Reviewed By: pibi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 07:18 EDT
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i really like it, its like i dont know wuts gonna happen next, its cooool;b
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Reviewed By: DDH On: June 09, 2008 19:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is fuking hot i hope you keep on writing..i am looking forward into reading the continuation
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 04:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
ooohhh!!! ^.^a
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