| "Rhythm" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: miko_hanyou_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 08:46 CST
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sequel! SEQUEL! hahaha. i LUUURRRVEEE this story.. i hope you find the time and inspiration to continue this!
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Reviewed By: ME :] On: July 22, 2008 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm such a huge fan of your stories! I'm so jealous of your ability to write with just the right amount of detail! Just as I was reading this story "I Love Your Girl" by Dream came on and the song goes really well with the story! It was awesome! :D
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Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: June 21, 2008 20:59 CDT
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So, I finally read this. Lots of fun, and good, wholesome smut! You've really found your curve ball. :)
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Reviewed By: Itachislove [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so into the the story, that I hardly noticed the typos. Very good plot and excellent lemon. I enjoyed reading it!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, your lemons are superb, plain and simply superb. I'm sorry i haven't reviewed in a while, especially displacement, my comp had been acting up and got it working right a few days ago. I'll read the new chapters soon and review them. For now, thank you for this HOT lemon, just what i needed... :)
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Reviewed By: SliverCat On: April 28, 2008 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Nice lemony goodness, but the typos detract from it. If you throw it to a good beta, it would be even better. Yum!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know, if you continued this, I would really consider reading it. Hell I've already considered it, and I know I would. Great job!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Sexy, gritty, and downright RAUNCHY! I really enjoyed that smut, though I almost feel guilty about it, lol. I don't know why you haven't written lemons in a while; you're darn good at them, lol. This was excellent.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 04:00 CDT
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*purrrrs happily* You really do have a knack for coming up with wonderful lemons. This little one-shot, like several of your others ("Two Inu's Are Better Than One" comes to mind), really could be turned into two or three parters. And I'm sure that no one out there would complain one bit if you did. *smirk* in fact I think many of us would thank you profusely if you did. (hint hint)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 07:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YUMMY!! i wouldnt be upset if you dont continue this :P
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed a few minor typos, but nothing I couldn't figure out. They were actually rather comical, as they became other words at times; "gas" instead of "gasp" and "trash" instead of "thrash", for example. But that didn't bother me in the slightest, I just wanted to point it out. I really love this one-shot. I think it works well as a stand-alone piece, however, if you wanted to continue it, I would certainly read the continuation. *Grins*
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting story... really good... great work...
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Reviewed By: Synlee On: April 25, 2008 21:09 CDT
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you should make this into a series..yum
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