| "When The Skeletons Dance" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: OldFReader On: April 13, 2012 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 23:56 EST
Comment/Review:
Is English your second language? I'm not being rude; I'm just curious.
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Title: snowecat (not signed in)
Reviewed By: snowecat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 00:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting premise, but you made a huge glaring error. 99 percent of Japanese people were uneducated in that time period. There would have been no way for the child to be able to read what he wrote. Literacy was mostly confined to the priesthood and the nobility and not even them sometimes. And where did the seven-pointed star come from? If she's been attacked and beaten by villagers, there is no way they would have left that one her. It either would have been destroyed or stolen.
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