| "Myouga's Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting concept, however your spelling and grammar are off... Way off... Other than that I look forward to what happens next. - Draca
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Reviewed By: Sara_bell_from_hell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes do make her be able to fight. She is supossed to be a secret agent. Oh and does she live alone? If so where are here parents? i had to ask. =-))
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sara bell from hell is right, you have to update plz, and plz make Kagome good at fighting (and better than Inuyasha). You did a really good job.
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: Sara_bell_from_hell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 19:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Upadate Update Update! I like the way this story is going so many possibility's!
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