| "Minor Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 01:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sessnschusangel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 18:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok so it's spelled patient and frustrated and Don't worry sometime even the best of people have trouble spelling stuff especially if you don't usually write it out. I liked this chapter and the little background info that you gave on Duo and Hilde. I can't wait to see what happens next so keep up the good work and update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Sessnschusangel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this so far. You have a few spelling errors but other then that it's pretty good. I can't wait to see their reaction to the video tape and what exactly is on the video tape. Keep up the good work and update as soon as you can.
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