| "A Beautiful Occurrence" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: bryony-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2009 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i only have one word to describe the epicness of this fic... OMGTFISAICWFTNC!!!! if your not able translat it means, oh my gosh this fic is so awesome i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! i didn't know how else to put it into one word ^^ please continue it! and if you don't mind me asking when are you going to post the next chapter?
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Title: more along the lines of encouragement than a review...
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 09:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
... but I can't wait until you write more!
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Reviewed By: blugrl320 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! I'm glad to see that you have continued the story. I am really enjoying it so far, but I realize that we all are busy with other things as well so I hope you don't feel pressure when I say that I can't wait for the next chapter to finally read about Sasuke's apperance!!!
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Reviewed By: blugrl On: October 08, 2008 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry, keep at it!! I want to see where the story goes and what happens with Naruto and his son!
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Reviewed By: blugrl On: July 06, 2008 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not really all that good at grammar so I can't help you there, but the reason I gave you tens on everything else is because I love your story!! I was honestly waiting and waiting for the next chapter to be posted and I can say I was most defintely not disappointed. The fifth chapter was great. I don't know where you get your ideas but I hope they keep on coming. Please, don't let lack of readers stop you from writing. The story is great and I would just love to read more. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangeldai666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 23:54 CDT
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please update soon! i really wanted to review before this to help give you incentive (idk if thats how you spell it ) but i couldn't cause i was readin' it on my psp and i only now got to a computer. so please update! PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: blugrl320 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I can't wait for the next chapter!! I have to admit I didn't quite get the explanation of why he was pregnant but I do like the plot. I can't wait to see when Sasuke finds out!
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Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good. Update as soon as you can. Will naruto ever tell someone?
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Reviewed By: Himiko-san On: May 14, 2008 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARIGATO!!!! I love your fic so far im hooked
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Title: wootcakes baked to freshness with the oven of YOUTH!
Reviewed By: Iamnothere. On: May 08, 2008 18:45 CDT
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+) nice story... almost typed sorty... wow. Well, you rock, can't wait till you update ^__^ ja ne
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