| "Untamed: Lecherous Hand, Wandering Iris" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... nice that this ties in with It Takes Two also in the beginning... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay first of all I'm so sorry I haven't read or reviewed in quite awhile. I've just been so busy with work and whatnot that I haven't had a chance...okay I'll quit making excuses. Still would like to say sorry tho. Okay I only read up to chapter 3. I have one more chapter to go and I'm sure you'll get a better review (at least I hope you do) Anyways I really feel bad for Miroku. I mean he's so lonely...god I wish I could hug him! lol. But then I don't want the grope thing going on. lol. Anyways until the next chapter...bye!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 04:23 CDT
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Ch 3: Very dramatic chapter, but quite a way to start the two on their journey together. Interesting lead in to the Northern conflict, will be fun finding out just what's going on with that. I like the 'nameless, faceless woman' that Miroku references looking for, very insightful, I thought. Nice touch.
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this right after I finished 'It Takes Two', which is about 30 minutes a while ago. The Miroku part in this sequel is pretty good, and the turn of events in the ending of It Takes Two up to this is genius! Oh, and I like the lemons too, haha!!! Well, keep it up, you're very great! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2008 17:33 CDT
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that was good...good turn...
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 16:06 CDT
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this is going to be interesting...i cant wait...normally i dont like reading a full miroku story...maybe him on the side and inuyasha and kagome the main...but this is a nice change...and i have an idea that this is going to be good...and its an odd pair that ive never heard of...so...good luck i cant wait for you to finish...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 20:10 CDT
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Nicely done, I like how you interspersed the lemon with the present time/story. Very good job at flashback, while not getting overwhelmed with the lemon, I think. I'll def be looking forward to seeing that 'mysterious character' again, should be fun.
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there! Hmmm where are the other reviewers *looks around then shrugs* Oh well. It's funny but just the other day I was wondering when your Miroku story was going to be up and low and behold its up. So, anyways back to the review...I liked it. Well it has Miroku in it so of course I'd like it. The lemon scene was uh...*whispers* awesome. lol. Don't worry about the updating weekly...take your time and don't rush. Until next time bye ^_^
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