| "Avatar: The Wind on the Waves" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: SilverGodFanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I didn't comment on all the chaps, but I like to do one condensed review once I get as far as the fic is at the moment. For starters: You're freaking amazing. I don't fangirl, at all. I'm a nazi when it comes to what I read, and this is absolutely gorgeous. You have wonderful grammar, stunning imagery, and your story flows like water. I really can't express how much I enjoy this fic. With the target age group this show aims for, it is extremely hard to find work as well written as this on my fave pairing, so I'm counting my blessings I found you! No lies though, as I am just a taaaad past that "target age" for the show, so at first I got a bit weirded out by the love scenes, but they were done so tastefully and emotionally, that I have no qualms about it now. You truly are a top notch writer, and I look forward to reading the rest of this story, and the rest of what you have written.
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Reviewed By: Benovelence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2010 05:22 CST
Comment/Review:
uhh,where is ch1??I think its gone....pls re-upload..tq
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Reviewed By: imkingdavid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing job. I am going to follow this story closly. I can't wait for the next chapter, but please don't rush it. I could clearly picture the entire story in my mind as it happened. You get a 10/10 across the board.
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Reviewed By: imkingdavid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I just wanted to say great job. I really enjoyed how much detail you put into your writing. It's really an inspiration. BTW, I rated slightly low on originality because you basically stuck to the plot of the overall story. Nothing wrong with that, but it's good to see something new from time to time. It's ok to stray from the original sometimes. Cheers.
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Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was so good i loved it ( well any aang katara paring i love o0n a princeable ) could of used some more detail with the sex but other than that it was great
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Title: You better write more
Reviewed By: ouranlover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more. Please. Seriously, this fanfic rocks!
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow powerful writting skills you have. The first chapter I see was the longest for of course sexual reasons, and the chapters afterwords have been very filling. I hope you continue to write this story to the end, by end I mean where the big fight with the Fire Lord ensues. However if you were to not I still am very pleased by having sampled your work with just this story. Keep up the amazing work.
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Title: I want more.
Reviewed By: ouranlover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfics i've ever read. Pls don't stop writing and update fast.
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