| "Menage Au Inu" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: The calling On: March 26, 2015 20:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this sooooo much PLS write more soon :)
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Reviewed By: Mister Magic C On: July 10, 2013 01:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
First off Sunset, sorry about not reading and reviewing sooner, real life got in the way. I was very excited about this chapter and then I read it and felt that it wasn't that good, usually you have more descriptive writing sex scenes, I think chapter 13 Sesshomaru and Kagome sex scene was 10x times hotter and better than any of the Inuyasha and Kagome interaction in this chapter. I wonder what happens next really the only big event left is the dual mating, I wonder if your will try to introduce any wedges in the budding relationship like Kikyo or Naraku. I hope you get a lot of reader love. thank you Chris M |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2013 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good update! Yay, Inuyasha got to have sex! LOL. I think the comparison between brothers is spot on, and Kagome sure is one lucky girl to get both of them. Keep up the excellent work! |
Reviewed By: Mister Magic C On: June 17, 2013 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was your most interesting chapter to date. I am surprised Sesshomaru really agreed to Kagome's request this whole story it seems that he is in control of the couple, the alpha male so to speak. I really liked your portrayal of Inuyasha especially him being the virgin. I thought the Sessohmaru paragraph at the end was quite excellent, I liked the line were he said he hardly knows anything about his brother was a wonderful line. Once again I hope you continue to get a lot of reader love for your story. Thank you Chris M |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2013 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonder if that last review inspired this chapter, or if you'd already been plotting this, but either way I've got no complaints 'cause I'm Inu/Kag at heart and so that she had the thought to let Inuyasha be alone with her for his first time, without Sesshoumaru around, I really love that little detail. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Just because Sesshoumaru's stuck getting a play by play later on doesn't mean we can't be there to watch it live! LOL |
Reviewed By: Mister Magic C On: June 10, 2013 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hello Sunset Miko, I think you are one of the best adult fan fiction authors out there. I am having a little trouble with the flow of this story. This doesn't feel like a threesome story, Inuyasha feels like a inferior secondary character in this story. As a reader of this story I can feel the joy and passion you have for the Sesshomaru and Kagome interaction especially the love scenes but when it comes to the Inuyasha and Kagome interaction and love scenes I don't get that same feeling. An example from your story is in this last chapter, Inuyasha finds out Kagome was having sexual relations with Sesshomaru in the hot springs Inuyasha thought all those times Kagome wanted to bathe alone but he found out she lied about it and that hurt Inuyasha but all it took for Kagome to have Inuyasha forgive her was a couple of words. Also I thought one of the great aspects about writing a threesome was exploring how Inuyasha and Sesshomaru differ as lovers but most of the sex scenes seem to revolve around Sesshomaru being the better lover and Inuyasha being the inferior character and lover has to copy him. Sorry for my long review and rambling, I hope you continue to get a lot of reader love for this story. Thank you, Chris M |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2013 10:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful present to wake up to first thing in the morning! Keep 'em coming! Er...the chapters...and the characters too! LOL |
Reviewed By: ._. On: June 09, 2013 19:40 EDT
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Shit! I'm so fucking horny that I am ready to rape the willing SO the moment he walks in the door! The first orgasm will be in your honor if I don't end up taking care of things myself LOL! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2013 11:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I'm hungry, LOL. Good update! Interesting to learn that Sesshoumaru had been moaning and gasping and whatever in the past, and so clearly he's gone silent because he's trying to compose himself in front of Inuyasha, unwilling to let 'the hanyou' learn that the great and powerful Sesshoumaru can also be reduced to whimpering in pleasure. I think he's made one grave miscalculation, though, in assuming Kagome would either not notice or at the very least not do anything about it. Definitely looking forward to seeing what she decides to do to push him over the edge. First, though, if I were her, I'd need a bath, too, LOL. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: KaoriHigurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2013 17:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing as always, Sunset. :) Not to mention it's fun to see the brothers agreeing...you have a way of doing these fics. :D Looking forward to the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2013 01:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What impeccable timing! I swear it was just earlier today that all of a sudden this little gem of a story popped back into my brain, and I thought lazily, 'hmm, wonder when it'll be updated again', just barely starting to feel that itch, that really bad 'I hope it gets updated soon' feeling, and then you did! Either you read my mind or vice versa; maybe I just sensed that an update was coming. Loved the new chapter, coincidence or not. Not going to try to tempt fate and think about more frequent updates just to get disappointed, LOL, so update again whenever you can, and I'll definitely be happily awaiting your next chapter, whenever it is. :-) |
Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2013 16:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, and I can't tell you how mad I was at myself when I forgot the name of it. I had actually been in the process of searching for it for the thousandth time when you had updated it and I was like..."Oh, crap, there it is!" I am so happy you updated, because not only did you reveal this story to me again, but I got to reread it with an added chapter! I can't wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2013 12:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! So glad you're back to this story again! I actually saw that you updated the other day, but started reading it again from the beginning just to refresh my memory, and then my stupid modem died and I was without Internet for a few days! Gah! I knew there was a new chapter to this and couldn't read it! Anyway, awesome update, and really awesome cliffhanger, LOL. I'm with Kagome, I can't wait to see this... |
Reviewed By: Animegirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2009 07:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sharing is caring but poor kouga
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 05:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story and a very interesting idea! I love the 3 of them together but i wonder in the future is it still gonna be strickly het or is there gonna be some yaoi once inu and sessy get more comfortable in this new relationship? Anywho i cant wait 4 more!
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