Reviewed By: MoonSpice On: December 07, 2008 22:24 CST Comment/Review: Ok... why do I have the weirdest feeling that the first chapter is from a story I had read once???
Title: Sunbathing Reviewed By:CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 16:38 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Yes you do write good lemons. I like how open Inuyasha is about his desire for Kagome when he finds her. And Kagome lost her shyness around him too which is a plus. This was a nice break from studying so thank you.